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[tecxx]

hello...

ich bin gerade mit meiner masterarbeit fertig geworden und suche jemanden, der gut englisch spricht. es dauert max. 5 minuten, geht nur um eine einleitungs-seite in englisch, wer mag sich das schnell durchlesen und mir eventuelle grammatik/rechtschreib fehler melden?


Abstract

Introduction:
Within the scope of a master‘s thesis done by Dr. Med univ. Gerd R. M. Lorünser in the year 2006 at the UMIT in Hall/Austria, an Ad-Hoc-Query Builder was drafted which allowed the analysis of biopsy data. Based on his concept a Query-Builder application was implemented later on in Java programming language. It required technical background knowledge from the user to be used properly.

Objective:
The objective of this master‘s thesis is to develop an algorithm that creates database queries across one or more database tables automatically, without requiring the user to know details about the underlying database structure. This algorithm should then be implemented into the already existing Query Builder software or a new standalone tool, which would have to be developed first.

Methods:
To get a grasp of how such an „automatic query builder“ works a prototype application was developed in PHP/HTML first. After analysis of the software packaged developed by UMIT it was decided that it can easily be extended with the new functionality, and developing a completely new, standalone program would not be necessary. Finally, the objective of this thesis was realized in Java in a three step analyzation / programming sequence.

Results:
An easy to install product was created which is ready-to-use without any changes to the target database system (LINDA-DWH Repository). The intuitive graphical interpretation of the tables and their links allow even non-experienced users to work on the system easily.



danke !

[Dicebox]

also ich würde das so schreiben:

Within the scope of a master's thesis, written by Dr. Med univ. Gerd R. M. Lorünser at the UMIT in Hall/Austria in the year 2006 , an Ad-Hoc-Query Builder was drafted which allowed the analysis of biopsy data. Later on, basing on Lorünser's concept a Query-Builder application was implemented in Java, requiring technical background knowledge by the user in order to be operated properly.


Methods:
First a prototype application was developed in PHP/HTML to get a grasp of how such an automatic query builder works. After analysing the software package, developed by UMIT, the decision was that it could be extended with the new functionality easily and developing a completely new, standalone program would not be necessary. Finally, the goal of this thesis was realized in Java by using a three step analysis / programming sequence.

Der Beitrag wurde von Dicebox bearbeitet: 27 Feb 2008, 17:58

[eigengrau]

Query Builder oder Query-Builder (beides im Text, aber eher ersteres)

"in Java programming language" kommt mit holprig vor. Entweder "in the Java programming language" oder "in Java".

falls "was drafted which allowed" bleibt, dann ein Beistrich vor which.

"analysis of the software packaged developed by UMIT" software package (ohne d).

[Dicebox]

hmja, der rest passt eigentlich (IMG:style_emoticons/default/alien.gif)



Der Beitrag wurde von Dicebox bearbeitet: 27 Feb 2008, 17:54

[tecxx]

danke schön!